Friday, February 15, 2013

destiny-part 19


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so I opened the door I was too busy looking down holding up my dress when I pumped into someone I lifted my head and there was two ladies with very familiar faces

it took me seconds to take everything in

they're then same girls in that dream!

I gasped and tried to get away but my arms got held

I moved my hands trying to get away from their grip but I couldn't they were too firm

I tried to scream as hard as I could but my mouth was covered

I was breathless I couldn't do anything

I prayed that I wouldn't get my asthma attack it wasn't the right time at all

i felt fresh air on my face were taking me outside the mall

I quickly threw one of my rings on the floor

I thought that maybe if they started looking for me they would know

after that they took me to a car

I was so scared I couldn't even think

the only thing that was on my mind was "calm down this is just a dream"

I squinted my eyes and opened them but nothing happened

I whispered

"يا رب يا رب يا رب"

the two girls started mumbling something in Chinese

the only thing that I understood was "ta de ba"

which meant "her dad"

wait.... what does my dad has to do with all of this?

all the terrible thoughts came to my mind

what if I never saw my family again?

what if I got trapped for the rest of my life?

what if what if..

and I had enough my head felt heavy and I broke down..

the girls looked at me and smiled the nastiest smile

they covered my face with a white cloth

and my vision got really blurry my body felt really heavy and I fell....

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aziz's point of view:

1 hour passed I tried to call her but she didn't answer

2 hours I called her again still nothing

3 hours and I had enough i called her a billion times and she never picked it up

I started going through the shops looking for her everywhere

I went and asked about her to the workers at the shop

after going through a few shops finally someone knew who deema was

me:where was she? where did she go?

the worker:she came and asked me about the fitting room

me:did you see her get out of the shop?

the worker:I don't know sir I was busy with other costumers

me:where's the fitting room

I said in a rush

he pointed at the corner

I rushed to there

I went inside not bothering what the worker was blabbing to me

I opened all the doors and then I found a half closed door

I opened it to find deema's clothes and bag on the hanger!

I panicked where did she go to what happened to her ahhhh this is confusing!

I quickly asked

me:is there another way out of the mall?

the worker:yes there

he pointed at the small door

I ran there and opened it as fast as I could

I looked for anything that would show that she was here

I looked at the street and I found a ring

I looked at it closely and then I remembered

YES she was wearing that!

I ran to the street to hopefully find her

but i found nothing

I didn't know what to do

should I tell her dad? majed? the police?

I was very confused

I sighed

couple of minutes passed and I was walking down the road looking for a taxi When finally an idea popped in my mind

I remember she said she hated girls

so she probably has guy friends so I'm going to ask her sister about it and they'll help me find her because I don't want to make her family worry

I quickly went inside the taxi and went back home

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I arrived to our street so I rushed to deema's house

Amal opened the door

I quickly asked

me:Amal eash esm deema's friend the guy?

I asked as if I knew

Amal:saleh g9dk 9a7?

me:yes whatever give me his number or something a7taj aklmu

Amal looked confused

an answer 3aziz QUICK

me:she went with him -I explained

ahh thank god

Amal:umm okay come inside I'm going to look for the number

me:no thank you bs ab3'a alrgm

amal: okay

she answered confused

after a few minutes she came and gave me his number

I thanked her and went to the taxi and ordered him to go back to the mall

I then called saleh

me:alslam 3laikum

saleh:w 3laikum alsalam

me:m3k 3bd al3aziz alx a7taj ashofk be mall x 3shan fe Shay 3n deema alx Mhm w lazm agolk

saleh took some time to realize what he was saying

saleh:5ala9 enshalla masaft al6reeg w aji

I went and sat in some random cafe I was so nervous I still cant take in what happened to her

after twenty minutes I noticed a guy coming towards me he looked Saudi

so I guess this was saleh I greeted him in a rush and started saying

me:elyoum Ana w deema jena le ha4a al mall w galt enu tb3'a tro7 shopping l7alha bs mrt thalath sa3at w Ana aklm 3leeha w ma Trd w est3'rbt fa r7t adwr 3leeha bkl m7l lmn lgeet wa7d 3rd shklha w wdani alfitting room w lgeet mlabs'ha w shn6t'ha m3lgat bs hy mu mwjooda w s2lt al worker gal enu feh bab min jeha thanya w youm 6l3t lgeet 5atmha ha4a

I showed him the ring and his face got really bright red

me:hdy Lw sm7t w Ana ab3'ak tsa3dni ndwrha w ma ab3'a ngool le ahlha el7een w enshalla ma yji al leeel Ella w 7na lagenha w Ana ma a3rf hong kong fa a7tajk tsa3dni

he sighed

saleh:awl Shay lazm nklm alshr6a w nbl3'hm w b3den nbd a ndwrha

we called the police and told them and we went and searched for her everywhere

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two days passed and we heard NOTHING about deema

her family knew everything and everyone was searching for her everywhere but nothing happened

deema's point of view:

two days passed and it was like hell I was trapped in the same exact place that I dreamed of

I was so scared they treated me like shit

the had me in the tiniest room that had nothing in it

they never gave me food water was the only thing I got

the only thing I did was pray that someone would find me somehow and get me outside of this hellhole...


your comments xo

7 comments:

  1. Ohh sorry i forgot to comment
    your story is amazing 9dg you deserve more comments walla
    keep going and don't care about what others say
    its great and you are an awesome writer and your personality is beautiful keep it that way pretty xx
    i love you and post soon xx

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    1. THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH IT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME I LOVE YOU!!
      -saudi_blogue

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  2. Hi
    This chapter is the best of course
    And you made me so excited

    You're very perfect in writing

    Go ahead girl

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    1. omgggg thank youu so so so so mucchh this made my dayyyyy I adore you!!!!
      -Saudi_blogue

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  3. Wohaa!! That was a good post!! A really good one!! And I liked the action tha happened!! Keep it upp sweetie<33 beyond awesome blog!

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    1. THANK YOUUUUUUU!!! I'm really glad you liked it! it means a lot really!
      -Saudi_blogue

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  4. I'm so excited to read the next chapter , post soon 7beebti <3

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